My Shoe Recount

We are learning to write recounts we have to have a success criteria this is what you need.A title, Orientation (beginning)- who what when where why. Then we have events (middle) things that happened in chronological order. Then we have conclusion (ending) one more thing one comment like ( I had a fantasic holiday).

The Shoe For Life

I'm a shoe, can't you wear me I've been here for ages since you dropped me. Can you put me somewhere else not under your bed, like on a self but then I thought I might be forgotten already can you hear me no you can't please pick me up from under your bed it's hold and dark under here have you thought of wearing me or give me to someone else so I can be happy other wise I’ll go to the bin. Remember me! You Always Used To Wear Me!  Where Did We Go Wrong?  Did You Find Me?  I'm Under Your bed I’m waiting to get outside to play in the grass like we used to. I want to have those memories again.

You!  I mean girl come on you just left me here waiting and waiting. Yay she’s coming to wear me finally. I’ve waited for this day I thought it would never come true It makes me sad when you kick me when you don't even know because I'm under your other shoes. Can you fix me my hair has been cut my heart is stopping and going Once you and your friend kicked me what if I kicked you how would that feel It hurts. At school you left me outside in the rain do you care about me well it doesn't look like it I have had enough I want you to see how much its hurting me. I love going on adventures with you and your friends but I don't get to go on them anymore you would rather take my sisters then me and my brother. Is our design on us cool remember when you brought us you like our design do you still like it if you don’t I’ll. Your mum asked where am I meaning me where am I supposed to be im supposed to be on your feet I think you have got older and don’t like me put me on trademe and sell me for money that's what you're probably going to anyway how can I help you and still be your shoe why have you done this to me and my twin.

That problem was where she didn’t even know she had me when she cleaned her room she picked up all her shoes and tried them on to see if they fitted and she found me but didn’t try me on she tried every other one on but not me you had us under your bed with the other shoes but we are bad are we I guess we are. One question why do you leave us sitting under your bed. Is this bad for me and my twin we could die get thrown out and we would be in the stinky bin ‘ewwww’ yeah that's what I mean I’ve done nothing I meant me and my twin have done nothing. We see monsters it’s scary i'm afraid of them I can't say it even I wanna be like the others but i’m not why am I not like the others can I be like the cool shoes can I ? I'm just a shoe am I. I’m like a human but a shoe it’s hard to eat and drink but it’s easy for you to do that stuff. I'm sick of it i'm going to go outside and wait I can’t because I can’t walk can you please take me outside please please. Oh my gosh you're doing it you do care about me and my twin yay I'm so happy you're the best.

The other problem was how did she still like us meaning up the top I said she didn’t like us but that’s changed but how. I think i'm in a dream am I no this is my life would you want to be in my life in your thinking I’ll probably but i’m not a human i'm a shoe.

Thanks for reading bye. Maddie