Monday, 13 February 2017

Maddie's Memoir

Memoir


The beach is a sandy place with water that comes up and washes whatever is on the beach like sticks and stones, when you're in the water the stones hit you feet, it hurts.
When I was eleven Caitlin,Ethan,Louie,Bailey,Tash and Dave took the dogs for a walk the other night at the beach the dogs are Kasse and charlie, First Dave took Kasse and charlie in the car because they got too excited when we put the led on them but Dave took it off because they were crazy in the car, Caitlin,Ethan,Louie,Bailey,Tash and I walked to the beach. When we all got to the beach Caitlin yelled ‘dad’ wait for us! Because Dave was walking down to the water, then Caitlin had to take Charlie or he would be gone, I went down to the water, I took my shoes off before I went in the water.


After about half an hour the water was really weird like there was waves everywhere. Tash and me were by the water and this big wave came and got me wet Tash ran up to the stones and it nearly took me out but lucky I'm fast, Caitlin was laughing I ran up to her and took her down to the water and the wave came I held her and it got her because I ran back up when It was going to hit her. Tash had charlie and Dave had Kasse I wanted to walk charlie but he didn’t want to go in the water.


About an hour later we were walking back from the sandy hill’s I think it’s called the stone crushes, I was walking charlie since there was no water near the stone crushes, charlie ran and ran charlie had his lead I was running then we got back from the beach and we went back to Caitlin’s house. Caitlin and I had to go in the car though. Then we got to Caitlin’s house and Caitlin and I had to have a shower because we had sand everywhere on us I mean everywhere, then we got changed.


At the end of this we got changed then we all got to go in the car to get a frozen coke but I call them a frozen cola, anyway we got in the car and we got five frozen coke’s and one top choc cone and a normal coke for Dave had the normal coke and Tash had the top choc cone. Then we drove back to Caitlin’s, then we drunk our frozen coke’s, Tash ate her choc top cone and Dave drunk his coke.

By Maddie.

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