World War One
In World War 1 it was 28 July 1914, My name is Susie Davey, This is my story. My dad is in the war probably fighting now, my mum sent me away to the war to see my dad. On the way I found guns and I grabbed one I saw some dead bodies laying around me while I was walking to my dad, I had blood on me it was disgusting, the gun was full ammo I shot a bullet and…..
Then people started to shoot at me but I ran behind a trench, then I moved a little and fell in the trench, I started to bleed but it wasn’t to bad. One of the war people said “are you alright” I said “yeah I’m fine”. After I got out of the trench I had been covered with dirt, it was getting dark and darker as I was walking it was really loud but then I thought and said to myself…..
I’ve always wanted a sister or a twin it would be fun because I would have someone to play, sleep,cry and hug with, But I never had any of those. Now I have to find my dad I hope he’s ok. It was so loud I have found a little cabin I was like score for me and no one was is it but then I thought if someone blows this up i'm going to die, so I changed my mind and said “I'm sleeping like the army men do but i'm a army girl…. There was shadows and I was scared it was about 7:40 pm so I started to fall asleep.
I woke up at 12:30 at midnight I said to myself “I need to see my dad I haven't seen him for 2 years” I started to cry and keep crying, I really felt like I had a sister or twin. Then it had been 30 minutes passed by… another half an hour passed by, then I heard a weird noise in the sky and it was coming down really fast then it hit the ground and exploded I went flying far away from there I walked the opposite way to find who find crashed that plane, my ankle was really saw, as I limped while walking I was trying to run because it was getting to dusty, I tripped over and landed on my ankle again I cried and walked away from my pain. There was lots of gunshots and I nearly got shot but I dodged it. I keep walking and I found this little cook station.
I couldn't find my dad anywhere but then I thought I could go to flanders field just to see if my dad died…. 2 hours later, my dad didn't die I had picked a poppy I said “yes my dad is alive yay” he must be in the war somewhere. I ran to the war he must be somewhere I said. I was still running and I heard a gunshot I saw my dad and I saw this other kid running to my dad I was shocked that another kid was running to my dad I thought that my dad didn’t want me didn’t want to have me as a kid so I got ANGRY and I pushed the kid over and said “That’s my dad if you touch him I will yell at you” my dad said “you both look the same it's like your twins are yous?” we said we don't know each other or never seen each other so I said “what's your name?” She answered with “my name is Susan” and I said “my name is Susie” She said “wow cool name we nearly have the same names” I said “yeah….” So we didn’t know we had a twin sister it was pretty cool to have a twin sister so our dad had to go fight again but we got sent home on a plane and we don't have the same mum but Susan’s my offered if my mum wanted to have Susan my mum said “yes I will you may come and visit and any of that stuff ya know?” she said “yeah well anyway goodbye.”
The end - By Maddie.
