Hatched
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The crows had been gathering for some time, no doubt displeased by the girl’s actions.
She could feel the cold, wet slime dripping slowly from her fingertips, but it didn’t bother her. Her hands were still, steady, without fear: she had been eagerly awaiting this moment.
All she could think about was the creature in front of her, finally escaped from its cage. It had hatched. It was time…
To find a bush that was cosy and warm for the creature, as the time was ticking and the darkness was going deeper and deeper to sudden darkness, she was walking slowly and slowly as she got to the bush that she wanted and it had a flax door! She was normally supposed to be home at 5:00pm she didn’t have a time or anything to contact someone. She wanted to walk back but it was to dark, so she stayed at the bush with the egg don’t know what to do with it, she stayed there the night, as she shut her eye’s to go to sleep something happened to the egg……
The egg was rocking and it started to glow, the girl opened her eyes, as she opened them a big what!?!?! She said, the colour was rainbow but it had green slime/goo. She wanted to keep it but she couldn’t because she had no food or anything for it. As she was looking for something to eat for herself, at her house her mum was worried, she was worried aswell what she was going to eat, she found a box……
Inside that box was a food and water storage with juice, macaroni, potato and gravy with sausages, water, some yummy ice cream and doughnuts! Anyway she ate some of that. It was yum ‘she said’ after she took the food inside the bush with her, there was blankets there a roof and mostly everything so if it rained she wouldn't get wet, there was a pair of clothing with pants, t-shirt and shoes plus socks. That's all she needed, for this moment, but she didn’t need all that stuff, she didn’t put them on
The girl was eating the food and she had too much food in the basket so she gave some to the creature but the creature didn’t eat it, the creature wasn’t going to eat it because the creature was sick but she didn’t know. As she packed everything up she, used the food bad as a pillow and used the napkins as a big blankets, she layed down with a scared thought in her head, what she was going to do with the creature.
The creature was making these weird noises as the girl was trying to sleep, it was like puking and sounds like crying but wasn’t, she couldn’t get to sleep. She was so tired to even look at the creature at this moment, she couldn’t fell her feet as she moved around, the moment when she shut her eye’s she felt like she had nothing to hold or nothing beside her to keep her warm when she was cold. The creature was rolling around in the egg, the girl heard cracks, and when she was lying down she just blocked her ears and shut her eyes again and fell asleep.
The next morning she woke up the egg was gone, she still had food she ate the cold macaroni ‘yum’ she said, she had a drink of juice, and she got a jersey on to keep warm it was a bit chilly. She was scared because the egg was gone and she couldn’t find the egg. Her knees that had blood, the blood dried up. She was ready to go home, so she headed off home. Half way home she found parts of the egg broken she ran because she got really scared. She hit her house she ran inside and said ‘mum’ she ran to her mum, hugged her and said I got lost…..
Hi Maddie,Im Emily from lake brunner school. Really great story but you said that the shelter had blankets and then later on in the story you said the girl had to use napkins for blankets.
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