Portrait Poem
My hair is like a smoothie poured over my head
When i brush it, it drips.
My brain is a working thing in my head that gives me idea’s.
My eyebrows are like bumpy roads when a car’s going on it.
My stomach is like a monster growling and it shakes my body.
My eye’s open to breathe and see and when they shut they stop.
My teeth are like bones crunching when the brake and full out.
My hands are so small, people can't even see them.
My feet are like little tiny mountain’s moving everywhere.
My ear’s are a beat that plays music.
My shoes are a size way too big but they fit, size 6 or 3 fit perfectly.
My eyelashes full down when I cry
My heartbeat beat’s like a drum but it doesn’t make sounds
Make someone’s day your day, your dreams have no limit’s, love your life and you're a human not a lazy potato.
By Maddie
Hi Madison.
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem because of how heartfelt it was. Next time you could double check your punctuation and spelling. I also love the last sentences of your poem as it is inspirational.
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